英語六級(jí)批改作文范文

　　篇一：

　　Why is fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of times.Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world.Everytime when I go to Mcdonalds,it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china,and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living, especially popular in young people.For another, it is simply to worship things of foreign countries,I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese hamburger from Xian.

　　But on the other hand, A lot of chinese fast food restaurant is becoming more and more popular, so little by little, the junk food like hamburger will not be the only good choice for chinese people.

　　篇二：

　　Why is(刪除) fast food is so popular in China? I have asked myself a lot of(改為several) times. Actually it is not only so popular in China, but also all over the world. Everytime(改為Every time) when I go to McDonalds, it is always full of people.

　　It is so prevailing in china, and I think the main reason is that fast food is so convenience for people working and living(刪除), especially popular in(改為among) young people. For another, it is simply to worship(改為 a kind of worship to) things of foreign countries, I think. I really do not think that hamburger is more delicious than our chinese(c要大寫) hamburger from Xian.

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